Marilyn Humbert – Writer's Edit

This piece is part of our ongoing series 'Poem of the Month'. Every month, the Writer's Edit team selects their favourite submission and provides detailed feedback to the author. Stay tuned for an interview with Marilyn Humbert, discussing her inspirations and literary influences. Small Hours by Marilyn Humbert Bronze chains anchoring stars and moon to the dome break, scattering shiny beads under the bed. I stumble, scraping my knees in Cimmerian light, a child learning to walk through obscurity, drawn to the vastness of this onyx sea. Wordless, lying drowsy, inhaling stygian breath Charon ferries me to the other side. Time and tide are measured by gods near Lethe's steep banks where Hypnos stashed his satchel of sand for Morpheus to find. Fireflies beetle through small hours. Claw and mandible desecrate weft and warp, rasping the piceous cloak of night, threads rafting thistledown on the breeze. My mind whirs, a wind turbine out of control waiting for the supervisor to push the off-switch. I struggle to discover gems of sleep, knee deep in a mullock heap tossing obsidian chunks over my shoulder, blistered hands grasping the shovel shaft. The blue-eyed recorder is demanding attention: a narrow beam chewing through layers of ebon until gloom's malignant heart is reached and darkness is shattered by sunrise.